| Author - KRYSTALLIN | Title - LOVE'S FIRST KISS | NC17 - rating |
| Date: | 6.9.2003 8:35 |
| Name: | Kate |
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| Don't leave us hanging!!!! Please!! What happens?!?!?!? | |
| Date: | 24.8.2003 9:04 |
| Name: | tamara |
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| ooooh.. wow thats great! :) | |
| Date: | 23.8.2003 18:10 |
| Name: | Ali |
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| I love this story and can't wait to see where Vig comes in. You're an awesome writer, but I tell you that all the time. I'm going to go check out the website for the other chapters. Again, this is an AWESOME story and your writing style kicks butt! | |
| Date: | 23.8.2003 16:34 |
| Name: | Dani |
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| I like this version of Sleeping Beauty! Update quick please. I'd just like to point out that in the interlude, you said that Viggo was four-score. A score is twenty, so your saying that he's about eighty years old. Just thought I'd point that out. Keep going with it, it's great! | |
| Date: | 12.8.2003 13:11 |
| Name: | Krystallin |
| Homepage: | http://www.geocities.com/yasmin_toshido/index.html |
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| Thank you guys for your reviews! I wasn't able to return email my thanks to some of you, as there is no email listed, so I am putting this here. I truly appreciate you taking the time to make a comment and giving me feedback. :D For those that are interested, I have Love's First Kiss, up to Chapter 5, at my website. The URL is above. Paola, I tried to email you a thank you, but it bounced my email back. lol Thanks again all of you! xx Krys |
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| Date: | 11.8.2003 23:55 |
| Name: | Maudy |
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| Totally like it, most of the time I don't review which means that u've done an exellent job from my p.o.v. Please update! | |
| Date: | 11.8.2003 7:20 |
| Name: | Paola |
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| ok love it but u got ta update it please and so cool vig is a prince | |
| Date: | 11.8.2003 6:26 |
| Name: | jane |
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| write more write more!! please please! | |
| Date: | 11.8.2003 5:58 |
| Name: | gertrude |
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| oh, wow! that was so goood! i couldn't tear my eyes away! more please! | |
| Date: | 11.8.2003 0:33 |
| Name: | Legolas Greenleaf |
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| Please update. | |
| Date: | 7.8.2003 19:06 |
| Name: | Kathryn |
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| I read the whole thing with my jaw slack. It's like nothing I've ever read before...more please! | |
| Date: | 7.8.2003 6:13 |
| Name: | bridget |
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| Wow... this is really inventive- yeah, it's a take on a well known story but it's so well written and you're really making it your own. It's a great beginning to what I'm sure will be an incredibly compelling bit of fan fiction- which is just like you :) Can't wait to see more of this fairytale, babes! Good job! | |
| Date: | 7.8.2003 6:02 |
| Name: | Miss Anna Greenleaf |
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| More, please, please more! |
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| Date: | 6.8.2003 23:46 |
| Name: | Anja aka Dúredhel |
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| hi kryst! it's me again... i am so happy, that 'love's first kiss' is on this site now too :) so i have all my fav stories in one place. see more soon, right? | |
| Date: | 6.8.2003 22:20 |
| Name: | Silent One |
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| Fleur!!! NO!!! I love your stories! They so kick butt! | |
| Date: | 6.8.2003 3:23 |
| Name: | alys |
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| whoah, strange beginning! very foreboding, kan't wait to see how viggo will fit into this! and i really like the twist on sleeping beauty =) keep writing alys |
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