| Author - Cerulean | Title - The Governess | PG13 - rated | back to authors |
| Date: | 6.11.2004 21:31 |
| Name: | ceru |
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| hello all, thank you so much for your enthusiastic comments. britt, i"m sorry if you were offended. though i am a staunch democrat, i wouldn"t want to push my ideals down someone else"s throat. i have good friends who are bush supporters, and though i will never be able to understand them, i still respect their beliefs. chelle (sp?), thank you for your comments and for supporting my small expression of support for the democrats. it wasn"t meant to be divisive, and since we"re all just fans of orlando here, i hope we can get over those differences. gawd, i sound so sappy.. haha. well, that was all, thank you all! and i"m working on the next chapter, but will be going to prague all next week, so please be patient! adios chicas! |
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| Date: | 6.11.2004 20:54 |
| Name: | Dusty |
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| Hey ceru! It"s your wonderful story stalker, here. Love the update girlie, and thank you for the beautiful review for Fate Stepped In. I dedicated the newest update to you, as well as the other reviewers. How bout we strike up a deal, hmm? You keep writing this one, and I"ll keep writing mine? *feels all piraty* What say you to that? *clears her throat* Ahem. Anyway. Love it, girl! Keep on writing! Much love and many Orli filled Kisses! Dusty P.S. I read in the reviews that you moved to London? Well, it so happens I am there as well. Might see you around. Well, then again... lol. |
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| Date: | 6.11.2004 19:37 |
| Name: | chelle |
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| britt, everyone is entitled to their own opinion, hun. if you don"t like it, don"t read it. cerulean, i say, write whatever you please. it is your story, your space. if anyone else has a problem with it, they should learn to deal with it. thank you for taking time out of your busy life to write this fic (and many others) for us to enjoy. this fabulously written story is my favorite, btw. effective diction and perfect pacing. not too hasty. i can only dream to write as well as you do. keep up the fantastic work and i look forward to reading more soon. |
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| Date: | 6.11.2004 16:55 |
| Name: | Britt |
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| I am enjoying your story very much, but i found your last comment rude. | |
| Date: | 5.11.2004 3:47 |
| Name: | ann |
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| Please continue to update this story. It had me intrigued from the first chapter. It"s developing quite nicely and I"m enjoying getting to know these characters. | |
| Date: | 4.11.2004 17:47 |
| Name: | alexis |
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| wonderful! a very interesting storyline you have here. looking forward to your updates! :) cheers. |
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| Date: | 2.11.2004 2:20 |
| Name: | Kim |
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| Hey: I really am enjoying your stories... especially this one...being a history major I really like it... please update |
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| Date: | 28.10.2004 5:56 |
| Name: | annalon |
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| I really like this story. Please continue. The story caught my interest from the moment I started reading it. I just love historical stuff and then add Orlando"s beautiful face to it, Oh, how wonderful. And as someone else has written, I can sooooo picture Orlando in this character. Keep up this story. It is great! |
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| Date: | 27.10.2004 21:01 |
| Name: | Kalythianna |
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| This story sticks out so much on the arcive... but only in the best possible way!! It"s soo different, and unique. IMHO it"s some of your best writing, and I just can"t wait to see more of it! Keep it up Kaly |
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| Date: | 27.10.2004 19:34 |
| Name: | Mercade |
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| Very good writing so far. I like the setting, and the descriptions. Very good imagery, and cool story line! I hope to see more soon! :o) | |
| Date: | 27.10.2004 13:16 |
| Name: | Sandi |
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| I love this story and I can see Orlando in this setting. Your story is well written. I hope the rest of the fellowship are going to be included as friends or relatives. It is great and I hope you update soon. Sandi |
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| Date: | 26.10.2004 23:46 |
| Name: | karin |
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| very well done! i"m loving this story so far. it"s very well written and i love it that it"s in a different era. very clever indeed lol. the characters are also very well described. keep up with the great work! i hope you don"t give up on this story..it"s turning out to be fantastic! :o) toodles for now... karin |
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| Date: | 26.10.2004 23:42 |
| Name: | Santandria |
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| WOW! I loved this, it"s a wonderful story and I can"t wait for you to update Ceru, and thank you for reviewing my story (I will not tell you which story it is, as my review name is different to my pen name for reasons I do not wish to tell) but thank you nonetheless. You have wonderful writing style and a flare of imagination I admire alot. Thank you for a great read, and look forward to more. | |
| Date: | 26.10.2004 22:17 |
| Name: | Lucia |
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| I really, really like this. The voice is natural and it is very well written. Also, I would like to thank you for the easy to read structure of the chapters. Not a lot of people take the time! Keep writing! | |
| Date: | 26.10.2004 9:44 |
| Name: | lorraine |
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| i love the storyline and setting. period pieces are great. it a nice change to see these people as different characters. very cool. keep it up, i can"t wait to read more. | |
| Date: | 26.10.2004 5:42 |
| Name: | Una |
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| Cerulean, many happy congrats to your move to London. It is an exciting place :) As to your story ... MORE!! It has a good flow and the pacing is good, sometimes you switch from the more historical wording to modern English but it is okay ... nothing to worry about, it was just something that I noticed while reading. Other than that .. MORE MORE MORE - I want to know why Orlando who obviously loves his niece and nephew, is so serious about not marrying and having children of his own. Is it because he is the younger brother and doesn"t have as much money as his older bro? Una |
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| Date: | 29.9.2004 2:34 |
| Name: | cerulean |
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| i apologize to my readers for the delay, but i was min transit. now i am in no other place then london! i will update as soon as possible. please bear with me and give me any suggestions, since i'm having a bit of writer's block. | |
| Date: | 19.9.2004 22:53 |
| Name: | a |
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| you meany, keeping us waiting...no fair!! please update!!!!! sooon.... | |
| Date: | 8.9.2004 2:57 |
| Name: | robyn |
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| oh please please please update! its so sweet and i LOVE period pieces!!!! don't leave us hangin'!!! | |
| Date: | 7.9.2004 9:57 |
| Name: | Simone |
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| Update as soon as you can because this is a great story and I really want to read more!!! | |