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| Author - Cerulean | Title - The Governess | PG13 - rated | back to authors |
| Date: | 11.12.2004 19:35 |
| Name: | Lucia |
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| I think the pace is just right. Because of the era in which you have set your story, going to fast would seem wrong, I think. I"m actually more interested to hear about her family and about the other characters you"ve introduced! Can"t wait for Orlando to visit Viggo! By the way, great historical background! | |
| Date: | 11.12.2004 17:40 |
| Name: | claire bloom |
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| This is wonderful. She is so coy and dignified. She isn"t all over him, and is embarrassed about the fact that she has feelings for him. It"s a great storyline and I can"t wait for your next chapter. You should definitely elaborate on this whole family problem she has, because that is distinctly intriguing. Good work, and keep it up! (You invoke some long reviews from me, which doesn"t happen often, so you must be good!) | |
| Date: | 11.12.2004 17:37 |
| Name: | Kristine |
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| I love the story, but maybe something soon should happen between them??? | |
| Date: | 9.12.2004 3:35 |
| Name: | kiera |
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| i love it! the romance is moving slow but thats how it did back then...maybe you could create some kind of tension between them, not negative, but like, they feel something, and so that creates something between them...you seem to be mainly focusing on the romance side, maybe you could move the plot along, WHILE your moving the romance along, so that its just not a romance kind of thing, but an actual exciting story as well...your doing great, i love it, can"t wait for next update! | |
| Date: | 4.12.2004 9:40 |
| Name: | Kirana |
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| Finally! I uh...tripped over a couple of other stories on my way to this one, but I made it! this story is just excellent. I love the way you"re portraying the characters in the period. this story is just delightful! I"ll look forward to more updates (hopefully soon!) Keep up the good work! -Kirana :) |
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| Date: | 2.12.2004 22:35 |
| Name: | claire bloom |
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| Oh wow! This is a wonderful story, so different and refreshing. I can"t wait for an update! Good work again Ceru! I loved it. | |
| Date: | 29.11.2004 15:53 |
| Name: | Kalythianna |
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| Lovely chapter, keep up the great work. This story is such a gem. Kaly |
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| Date: | 28.11.2004 3:33 |
| Name: | kim |
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| hey... i really love it... i find myself checking everyday that im online to see if you have updated. Please write more im just so interested in these characters and the story line. great job! | |
| Date: | 25.11.2004 2:34 |
| Name: | maz |
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| great chapter! | |
| Date: | 23.11.2004 16:39 |
| Name: | alexis |
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| i can"t wait for ur next update! :) cheers. |
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| Date: | 13.11.2004 18:33 |
| Name: | cerulean |
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| hello to my faithful and helpful readers, i"m back from prague and ideas are brewing in my head, thanks mostly to that gorgeous city. i"m sorry the chapters aren"t that long but i"d hate to keep you waiting while i come up with something more substantial. and the flow is just how my brain works. (if that made any sense) i promise i"ll try and make this a many chapter story. peace out! -ceru |
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| Date: | 11.11.2004 21:41 |
| Name: | Una |
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| Cerulean, lovely addition to the story. I love it :) Please more, MORE ... M O R E *grin* Chapters are a bit too short but I know time restrictions and all in RL. Una |
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| Date: | 10.11.2004 5:21 |
| Name: | Leanne |
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| I just love this story! I like how this is in the Victorian era. Orlando just fits athe part. I can so picture him in the victorian era. Keep updating. | |
| Date: | 9.11.2004 22:36 |
| Name: | Christina |
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| Wow! i"m really enjoying your story! Please update soon! | |
| Date: | 9.11.2004 18:54 |
| Name: | jay |
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| The plot thickens....keep writing! I"m DYIN" to know what"s up next | |
| Date: | 8.11.2004 5:28 |
| Name: | nikki |
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| i love this story...MORE PLEASE! |
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| Date: | 7.11.2004 21:54 |
| Name: | claire |
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| That was great" | |
| Date: | 7.11.2004 21:36 |
| Name: | Doreen (aka Lady Doirin Aine) |
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| This is a great story. I enjoy stories set in the Victorian era, and this one is really good. I can definitely picture Orlando in this setting -as a matter of fact, in one of my stories, I have my OFC tell him that he is something out of a Jane Austen story. His looks are just perfect to play this sort of character. Can"t wait to read more. Beautifully written! | |
| Date: | 7.11.2004 9:41 |
| Name: | tanisha |
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| I love your writing and I really like this fic. I hope you continue. | |
| Date: | 7.11.2004 5:14 |
| Name: | tiffanie |
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| i am a big fan of stories taking place in this time period. you have a very nice flow to you story and i am ejoying your characterization of both orlando and your ofc. please continue soon. | |