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Date:	24.2.2005 12:50
Name:	tiniwiel
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Do ur muses take bribes or do i need to kick them or sumthing( ok i dont meen that) plz plz hurry and post sum more i need 2 reed it

Date:	12.2.2005 2:53
Name:	cerulean
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i am so sorry to the loyal readers of this story. my muse is stubbornly stuck on "in this silence" at the moment and won't budge! this story, in my humble opinion needs a more thought out plot and research into that time period. it will take time, but if i could beg for your patience... then hopefully i can produce a story to all our satisfaction. -cerulean

Date:	12.2.2005 0:22
Name:	VB
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Remember this story please, is there any way I can bribe your muse? Really great story, can't wait to read more.

Date:	19.1.2005 5:42
Name:	Mandy
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This story is really very well done. I like it immensely and hope that you will continue it soon. Sophia is a very good character, and your story seems well-developed. Thanks for contributing it, and I would love to read more in the future.

Date:	9.1.2005 18:15
Name:	cerulean
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So sorry to all my readers and reviewers.. I have been so distracted with life that I haven"t had a chance to really look at this story.. and frankly the muse is a bit lost right now. I shall try and recapture it, but meanwhile look for updates to my other story, which is flowing much easier. I"m keeping my fingers crossed that my trip to Paris and essays in architecture will stir something in this story. Thanks for reading! -Ceru

Date:	2.1.2005 4:28
Name:	Jaguar
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So far it is really good. A novel of that time period. I like that Sophia has a vulnerable side. I would like to see more of that. Also I want to see of an interaction between Eric and Sophia as well. Other than that, this is a really profound story. And the last chapter seemed a bit forced—not too much but I wasn"t too drawn into her fear and pain. But I am quite pleased with the plot so far. I like the idea of the reader determining what direction the story can go. Keep writing.

Date:	2.1.2005 0:37
Name:	stephanie
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Hey! great job so far. you"ve got a really great plot going. At first it was slow, but then it sped up a bit, I like it. Keep going, update fast! Chop, chop lol.

Date:	31.12.2004 0:13
Name:	Ireth
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I realy like your story, it captures the time-frame perfectly, and also the way the characters interact. I only want to point out a little mistake you made in the beginning of chapter 6, namely the fact that you make Sophia name Orlando, mister Bloom, shouldn"t that be mister Banshire?? Okay it must have been a slip of the finger, cause everyelse is so perfectly written. I love it very much and will continue to check for more updates, so please keep it up, it"s great!!!!!!!

Date:	28.12.2004 15:01
Name:	Kim
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Much better with the change in the room sharing... Can"t wait to read more... You create the best characters making your stories less Orlando obsessed and more original character obsessed... Just love your writing.

Date:	27.12.2004 7:40
Name:	Lianna
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You"ve made the story seem so authentic for it"s time period. I love the pace it, although I"m really anxious for "falling in love" and romance part of it.

Date:	27.12.2004 5:36
Name:	Stacey
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I"m really enjoying this story! I"m so happy when you update! :) I love the Regency period that you"ve set the story in, and the characters come across as very genuine. Keep up the great work!

Date:	25.12.2004 8:43
Name:	Claire Bloom
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Wow! This was a really good chapter and I loved it. Orlando is compassionate and exciting in this story. Well done!

Date:	24.12.2004 3:08
Name:	Jaguar
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This story is very good. I am only on chapter 3 but so far... it is very remeniscent of Jane Eyre... only better! And very Jane Austen... Like in terms of Mansfield Park (One of my favourites). I liked the fact that you did the total opposite of the norm and you placed it so differently. You have talent. Not to mention that the 19th century literature is one of my favorite periods to read. So keep writing. You should be very proud.

Date:	22.12.2004 13:30
Name:	Una
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Hiya Cerulean :) Lovely chapter ... some inconsistencies (the room sharing) but you got rid of them well enough. It is nicely paced and I"m looking forward to more :)

Date:	19.12.2004 23:14
Name:	cerulean
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thank you Kim, for your feedback.. i knew while i was writing it that it was bizarre and out of place.. so i tried to fix it.. a bit. :-/ hopefully it hasn"t spoiled the mood too much. p.s: thank you to you loyal readers and reviewers.. i DO listen!! :-D

Date:	18.12.2004 21:02
Name:	Kim
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Great chapter... i really don"t think that them sharing a room would have been allowed back then... but i love the fact that you use the on going wars and the past revolution in the story... great job!

Date:	13.12.2004 6:45
Name:	olivia
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i really love your story. and this sophie girl is a trip, she"s dignified and smart. she also comes off as strong without coming off manly or damaged. as for thier pace i think it"s just right. the time period they are in demands it. we wouldn"t want her to become some sort of harlet type. also i would never tell you what to write, you do a marvalous job of it on your own, but i am a sucker for protective chivalrious type men and would love to see orlando displaying that. keep up the good work!

Date:	13.12.2004 6:32
Name:	tiffany
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you should write something and try to get it published for real, your just really talanted. i like the pace of the romance just how it is. although i am very eagar to see them in love and such i always think the longer it takes the more it means. i am not into ordinary romances, i want real love with good characters, complications, and a captivating storyline. you manage to engage all three. please keep writing your an inspiration.

Date:	12.12.2004 3:02
Name:	Kim
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I think the story is going good... maybe you should wait for romance until you talk about the season and comming out, oh and about her family ... I love reading about that... I really enjoy reading...please keep writing