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Date:	30.7.2005 14:20
Name:	Danielle
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More please! Now we're finally getting some real excitement - can't wait for the next update. This is a fantastic story - keep it up!

Date:	29.7.2005 10:57
Name:	cerulean
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thank you kim, for pointing out the customs of that time. the first name thing, i agree i made the friendships in the story quite informal, hence viggo and orlando speak using first names, and orlando even unusally asks sophia to call him be his first name, which she does, reluctantly. the garden incident, i know is wholly inappropriate for the societal norms then, and that's why it takes place in the garden in dim light with no witnesses. and the last comment, i'm confused, since i don't recall anyone shouting at the party. i only meant to describe the atmosphere are loud in the sense that a very crowded room gets noisy, not that people were shouting. i hope my explanations make things a bit clearer. and i don't take any offense, and really appreciate your comments and attention to detail. :-D -cerulean

Date:	28.7.2005 6:42
Name:	Kim
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OK so you know that I am like a really really big fan of your stories and that I absolutely love your flare for writing... that being said don't take anything I say to heart because I'm just making a few comments(and you totally have license to write it anyway you want for I really love the story the way it is)so that others who read would know a little more about the time period and customs...Men and women during that time never refered to each other by their first names unless it was a relative, they always use miss whoever or mister whoever.... Although your character of Orlando is quite gentlemanly, and during the time discuss, men and women were more sexually open privately than was orignally thought, it would be totally improper for what happened in the garden... althought I thought it moved that story along and was quite romantic.... One last historical comment, please don't be mad at me.... men and women would never be shouting out at a party in mix company... men would never be playing cards near women, just not proper, you have to remember women were thought of as pure, fragile things that needed to be shielded from such flith as pleasurable sex, dirty language, over indulgence of drink, and of gambling...I hope I didn't offend you I just wanted to share some of the little I know about the time... again I really do love the story and really do wish I could write half as wonderfully as you do... I just can't wait for your next update...

Date:	26.7.2005 11:24
Name:	Samantha
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Great update. I was so excited that they finally kissed again. ~Samantha

Date:	26.7.2005 1:55
Name:	Ireth
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How about absolutely fabulous!!!??? I love this story and hope you will update it soon!!! Please you have to continue this!!!

Date:	25.7.2005 23:02
Name:	Nat
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I love your story!! I think it's really one of the best in here. Please keep going! I think it's perfect.

Date:	25.7.2005 17:49
Name:	Mary
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I think that it was a tiny bit rushed but I loved the new chapters! I can hardly wait to see what happens next! It's awesome!

Date:	25.7.2005 16:49
Name:	Sezza
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Eeeeee! Cerulean, thanks for updating! I was hoping there'd be a new chapter in time for my birthday, so I'm up late reading and loving it - as always! Sophia's reaction about Viggo is definitely extreme - I'm not surprised that Orlando is getting frustrated with her, though he could have been a LITTLE nicer about it, considering she'd only recently been nicked across the throat with a blade! I'm really loving the direction you're taking this - romance, adventure and intrigue! - and look forward to the next chapters. Great work - keep it up!

Date:	25.7.2005 13:30
Name:	Aee
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Oh wow... When's she gonna tell him who she is?? huh? huh? I love this story *does a little song and dance routine* now that I've shared my talent, will you share more with us? Please update soon!

Date:	20.7.2005 5:57
Name:	Kim
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OOOOO.... That was soooooo good... You truely are a great writer.... Please update soon!

Date:	19.7.2005 17:07
Name:	yairo
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very nice chapter indeed! it's always a pleasure to read how this story continues and you avoid being predictable. i wonder what's next...

Date:	18.7.2005 21:15
Name:	AnnieG
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The plot thickens. Yes, Lord Mortensen was my guess too. The "rugged face" and "cleft chin" sounds like Viggo. Anyway, I hope that horrible creep gets his soon (the spy not Viggo). :-) Thanks for the update Ceru.

Date:	18.7.2005 17:54
Name:	Danielle
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Oh, this is lovely! Is Sezza right? Is the mysterious man Lord Mortensen? How does Sophia know him? Cannot wait for the next chapter and I really enjoyed this one!

Date:	18.7.2005 11:54
Name:	Sezza
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Cerulean, this is such a lovely story! Thank you for the update. I'm really enjoying how you're developing their relationship - it's absolutely beautiful. I'm laying bets the 'familiar man' and rescuer is perhaps Lord Mortensen? I've been waiting for him to make an actual appearance after everyone else talking about him. :) I'm looking forward to the next chapter - this chapter was great!

Date:	18.7.2005 8:58
Name:	Aee
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sigh... Have I told you I love this story? Because I do. And you updated! *happy dance* Now, at the risk of sounding ungrateful, please update again soon!

Date:	18.7.2005 3:05
Name:	Sandi
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I absolutely adore this story. Please update soon. Waiting is soooooo hard. Sandi

Date:	14.7.2005 17:12
Name:	AnnieG
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Cerulean: You have GOT to update soon. I'm on pins and needles.

Date:	10.7.2005 1:22
Name:	Ireth
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Oh my, does the creep think she's some kind of double-agent or something? I hope not! That would complecate things alot!!! Especially with her finding happiness with Orlando! And documents? What documents? Please, please, please, please!!!! You must update soon, I just have to know what this is all about!! Love your story, love this chapter, but with the cliffy and all..... Please update soon? Love, hugs and kisses!!!

Date:	3.7.2005 22:49
Name:	Kim
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Wow what a great chapter... You really know how to move a story along in just one chapter! Have a nice vacation and write much much more!